Re: Arcadia, the underwater forest

by *sigil Fri May 06, 2011 7:38 pm

"moose begins to go to beta, carrying a very large and strange box strange box"

by **Nyx** Fri May 06, 2011 9:40 pm

lol its ok Sigil, you dont need to put the "" marks unless the character is talking, try having a character do something in a post that will help thw others react to it. like:

Moose smashed through the wall of the building his suit scraping against the wood and wires, Debris showered the room as he stood in the wake.

(Ive decided to also make a rule for posts to be a minimum of 4 sentances.)

by *sigil Fri May 06, 2011 10:34 pm

ok. can i reply with some stuff shorter than 4 sentences. if its good lol

by **Aaron Addle** Fri May 06, 2011 11:37 pm

( I love it how I sugested that but it got called stupid but now your adding it....)

by **Nyx** Fri May 06, 2011 11:43 pm

.... well we dont have many small posts on the maximum ride site... where as here, to add the filling im throwing it in... hehehe..... we were just kidding Razz

by **Aaron Addle** Fri May 06, 2011 11:44 pm

Aaron growled to him self silently wondering what on earth he would do now, he could always try to get the girl back, you could sell them for a fair bit nowdays,did he really want to go through the whole ordeal for some cash when he could steal it? Plus stealing didn't have as big of a risk factor involved, if that splicer was controling that many other splicers there was no doubt in Aarons mind that he controled a gang. Which meant that there might be a reward for taking him down, and rewards are allways nice.. With that thought he started dashing across the roof tops searching for the two. He finally found them, they where walking down a street hand in hand, kinda like those old black and white movies, except this one had sound and was in colour, not that there was really much colour down here. Aaron silently pulled his rifle over his shoulder and aimed down at the two, he didn't really want to kill them so he simply shot a shop window there was going past. "Aaron Addle, don't believe we've meet, see you have a little wee thing there that I want." he called out in a raspy voice.

by **Aaron Addle** Fri May 06, 2011 11:44 pm

(Brackets beta, brackets)

by **Nyx** Fri May 06, 2011 11:49 pm

(ah yes i forgots...)

by **Aaron Addle** Fri May 06, 2011 11:52 pm

(posting minimum beta, posting minimum)

by *sigil Sat May 07, 2011 12:13 am

moose is now near beta. hes standing no more more than 8.4 feet away. moose drops the box and opens it. He slides it towards beta with his rivet gun and sais. "take it ma boy, i got it just for you". (beta's big daddy suit)"we are going to have to find you a weapon later,use your drill for now"

by **Aaron Addle** Sat May 07, 2011 12:16 am

(thats not enough lines...)

by *sigil Sat May 07, 2011 12:20 am

(wtf else am i ganna add lol)

by **Aaron Addle** Sat May 07, 2011 12:41 am

(my one was originally two lines, I edited it.)

by **Martin Finnegan** Sat May 07, 2011 10:45 am

*what the hell did beta escape or what im completely lost*

by *sigil Sat May 07, 2011 2:07 pm

( yes beta did escape lol)

by **Nyx** Sat May 07, 2011 3:56 pm

(wow i missed a lot Neutral

)

Beta looked to the bid daddy curriously as he pulled his aching body to put the suit back on. As The helmet filled with the gas of his pressure tank he let in a deep breath. Beta twisted in his drill and tested out his speaker. "Where are we?" He asked feeling his strenght slowly returning.

by *sigil Sat May 07, 2011 4:01 pm

" we have to find your little sister" he grumbled the words "we have to hurry beta" moose scavenges around, he finds some rivets and hands them to beta. and begins walking away. moose makes a hand motion for him to come with moose. moose wants to know what the splicer is doing, stealing a little sister. moose knows we have to get to them before the splicer kills her.

by **Aaron Addle** Sat May 07, 2011 4:16 pm

(post minimum...)

by **Nyx** Sat May 07, 2011 8:08 pm

(you'll get posting eventually... and i added a pretty good amount *_* )

by **lily** Sun May 08, 2011 8:31 pm

Kiki's Head hurt and her skin was chard from the fire. "Where's my big daddy?" she asked noticing that they have not really gone anywhere colse to where beta was. kiki had a bad feeling creeping up the back of her neck. She eyed the stranger closely.

by **Nyx** Sun May 08, 2011 8:43 pm

(well now this is funny aint it.... I am thinking this topic is ruined who votes on just making a new one?)

by **lily** Sun May 08, 2011 8:59 pm

(sure)

by *sigil Sun May 08, 2011 11:01 pm

(lets see how long we can keep going before it actually is just messed up completely lol, maybe it can recover)

by **Nyx** Mon May 16, 2011 10:48 am

We will just restart *locked*

by **Aaron Addle** Tue May 17, 2011 12:34 am

this is kinda dead...

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